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I cannot see the cause of my own troubles;
I cannot understand why I ignore them.

Falling through the gaps and holes of our time line-
I see the sins and faults of my mistakes.
Now here i am on my knees again;
Begging for your truth.

I’m not Pleading, I’m just asking
What the hell am I meant to do?
I just a mortal, a walking being-
I can’t fall with, delicate wings.

I so deep and I’m so lost;
I just wanna help it all now
But I’m just froze in, a time and space,
Where I found peace in deep sea waste.

Please don’t tell me, I am worthless
Because I do what I think is right-
And don’t accuse me, of being hasty
I’m just doing what I believe

And I’m not crazy;
I’m just alittle unwell
And I’m not angry
I’m just taking my time

So please embrace me;
I’lll show you my ways
Cause I’m an angel, but my wings are decayed.
Don’t believe what, ever they say
But please try to understand; It not always that way
©2005-2009 ~Ravens-last-Cry
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:iconrecharukua:
it's a little choppy and awkward, but all in all I like :)
:iconravens-last-cry:
Well.. thank you, Woo! Comments finally!
:icontherealnaveed:
"So please embrace me;
I’lll show you my ways
Cause I’m an angel, but my wings are decayed.
Don’t believe what, ever they say
But please try to understand; It not always that way"

Definitly like this line the most. Nice poem :)

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A tight belt is like an all-day hug... from your pants!^_^!
:icondeathrages:
the contrast... i like it!!! :lmao:~~!!!! But i love da idea... its like to me, asking others, and particulary the one u cared for the most, not to see you as nothing... Great concept and idea!!! love it!!! :hug:

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Errr... I dunno how to sign from here =.=
:iconrecharukua:
of course. :) Well done.
:iconheaven--sent:
beautiful again! i love your work.... :)

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"Some people say i'm a horrible person, but it isn't true. I have the heart of a young boy... in a jar on my desk." -Stephen King
:iconblood-of-shinobi:
ooooooooh, i like this one! I like it a lot! :D

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